港大英語面試,我寫了一篇自我介紹,請高人點評一下。有沒有語法錯誤,還有什么不得體的地方請指出來。


推選答案interviewer作為稱呼有點生硬,除非是慣例,用sir,lady,gentlemen,視情況而定,都挺好的。
Aged at17有點漢化了。now,I 'm 17.
When it comes to my hobbies, they cover a wide range, among which
reading and swimming are my favorite.是病句,I have mang hobbies, among which
reading and swimming are my favorite.I usually go to libraryat weekends or holidays.I have a lot of books in my room .They cover amost every range.
At school,I enjoy all kinds of activities.I often try my best to take part in different kinds of activities to widen my eyes and experience different lifves.
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