精選答案（1）韓國是中國的近鄰，經濟貿易交流發達。韓國作為經濟強國，擁有著發達的教育水平和先進的教育模式，而建國大學具有悠久的歷史和強大的師資力量，因此我選擇了在貴校留學深造。
（2） 因此國際貿易在競爭激烈的今天顯得是如此的重要.
（3）所以這就更增加了我學習國際貿易的渴望和動力. 因此我真誠的希望能在貴校得到這一領域的進一步深造.
(4)任何學科都需要良好的理論基礎才能進一步的研究并運用于實踐當中,所以我研究生第一年的主要任務是學習國際貿易的相關基本理論和知識,并深入了解主要貿易國的貿易體制與政策;
（5)國際貿易中的絕大多數信息的發布、交流、磋商、談判、單證、文件等都是以英語為主，而且都是非常專業和正式的英語,所以在研究學習的過程中,在加強商務韓語的同時還將會更加加強商務英語的學習.
(6)由于從事國際貿易活動，要求貿易人員在掌握基本知識的同時，必須具有很強的實際工作能力,所以我第二年的學習將以如何把理論知識運用到實踐當中為研究重心.主要通過案例分析或者到海關、進出口公司參觀訪問或實習的方式來提高自身實際操作水平。
（7）因為國際貿易作為綜合性很強的一門專業課，和其他相關學科聯系很緊密，所以在我學習研究國際貿易的同時還將會注意學習如價格學、商品學、物流學、保險學和法學等學科的知識.
（8）假如貴校接受了我的申請，我將會以成為貴校引以為豪的畢業生為目標，全力以赴、高質量的完成學業，我有信心能做到。
(1) Korea Republic is a Chinese close neighbour , economy trade exchanges flourish. Korea Republic is owning developed educational level and the advanced education pattern as the economy powerful country,but strength building up a country learning have age-old history and big and powerful teachers enthusiastically, I have chosen therefore in expensive school study abroad pursuing advanced studies.
(2) international trade is competing therefore fierce look like being so-called importance today.
(3) reason why will have increased my aspiration studying international trade's and driving force more immediately. I hope going a step further being able to get this one field in expensive school therefore sincerely pursuing advanced studies. And any
(4) discipline requiring that fine rationale ability goes a step further study and apply to practice middle, therefore my graduate student the first years of major task are fundamental theory and knowledge studying the international trade relevance, go deep into trade system and policy knowing the main trade country;
(5) Information announcing , exchange, consult about most in international trade , negotiation , Shan certificate , document etc. all are to give first place to English, being extraordinary special field and formal English and , will be able to reinforce English study about of business affairs more therefore in the process of the study about studying, while reinforcing business affairs Han language.
(6)Use personal influence since being engaged in international trade , demand the trade personnel while having an ABC in hand , must have the very strong actual service ability, therefore my second year of study about will take how to apply theory knowledge to practice middle as the centre of gravity studying. Main operation is horizontal by the fact that case improves oneself reality coming the way analysing or paying a visit to customhouse , the import and export corporation pay a visit to or practice.
(7) that the comprehensiveness is very strong because of international trade accomplishes one door specialized courses, and relevance discipline connection is other very rapid and intense, therefore will be able to pay attention to the discipline studying if price learns , the commodity learns , logistics learns , Insurance and science of law wait's while I learn studying international trade knowledge.
(8) checks application having accepted me suppose expensive , I will may take the graduate who becomes expensive school enough to make oneself proud as target, go all out , high mass be completed self's studies, I am confident to be able to achieve.
這樣就可以了。