答案優(yōu)選hello ! I ,XX, graduated from XX university and majored in Administrative Management.Coming from Shandong, now I intend to seek a job in Personnel. With great reponsiblility, good abilities in organization and socialization, and strong team spirit as well, I have certain experience in marketing and management. Being receptive and innovative, I also have strong ability of systematic analysis and excellent judgement on market. I'll lay stress on group management and execution to fully understand company's maketing stategies, then efficiently achieve company's sales target in practice .
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