假如你是一位來自美國的留學(xué)生TOM,請你寫一封給你在美國的好朋友JIM,告訴他你在中國的情況 詞數(shù)60左右Dear Tom,
Long time no see! How are you? 好久不見！你怎么樣了？
I am studying in *** school in China this year. 我現(xiàn)在在中國某某學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)
I met many new friends here.我在這里交到了很多新朋友。
And we always play basketball together after class.而且在課后我們總在一起打籃球。
I find it is hard to study in Chinese.我發(fā)現(xiàn)用中文學(xué)習(xí)很難。
But luckily my teacher is strict. 不過幸運的是我的老師很嚴格。
And my classmates also help me a lot.而且我的同學(xué)們也幫了我很多忙。
Look forward to see your reply.
期待你的回信。
Best wishes,
Tom
純手打，有什么覺得不合適的地方就再問我吧，用的都是很基礎(chǔ)的詞匯了，固定搭配啊用法什么的也沒有錯誤
另外我想提醒一下 樓上的 excited拼錯了 classmate也拼錯了 不知道是不是筆誤
It's Li hua your penpal, how are you?
I heard that you are going to come to study in Beijing, I am so glad for you. Welcome to China!
The new semester starts in September, it's summer in Beijing. Like the weather in Chicago , Beijing has distinct four seasons in a year. It could be very hot in the summer time and very cold in the winter, but don't worry, all the buidings in Beijing have the built-in heating system, it'll be warm and cozy in the room during the winter time.
And there is another great thing about being in Beijing is that you can find almost any kind of food here, French, Korean, or Japanese... you name it! But talking about being in China, of course the best choice would be the authentic Chinese food. I bet you know about the famous Beijing Duck, let's go to try it together when you get here.
There is so much to say, that I could keep writing this letter for hours, but I prefer to talk to you when I see you here in Beijing.
Again, welcome to China!
Have a nice day Amy, and looking forward to seeing you in Beijing!
Yours,
Li Hua.
Dear students,
Linda, the exchange student in our class will go back to her own country. We are planning to have a good weekend with her, and we want to invite all of you to attend it. We will meet at the school gate at 8 O’clock this Saturday. Then we will go to Yizheng Musuem by taxi at fifteen past eight, where we can see some old photos and learn about the history of Yizheng. After that we will go to Yangzi Park on foot. We can go boating there. At 12 O’clock we will have lunch at KFC. In the afternoon, we will go shopping on Walking Street on foot. At half past 4, we will go back to school by bus and then go home by bike. Everyone should remember to take 100 yuan to attend this activity.
Yours,
Lily
| 試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們根據(jù)所給材料寫一封邀請信，邀請全班同學(xué)參加一個活動，和Linda 一起度過一個周末。材料中有詳細的時間及活動安排，我們要用正確的時態(tài)按照時間順序把這一天的行程表達清楚。通過分析可知，本篇短文應(yīng)主要用一般將來時，第一人稱復(fù)數(shù)表達。寫作時注意行文連貫，表達清楚，不要遺漏要點。并且多使用好的短語和句型以使文章流暢。 【亮點說明】這篇作文寫得比較清楚，詳細，對材料中的時間及活動安排表達的很清楚，并且按時間順序交代了這一天的行程。寫作的人稱和時態(tài)都切合題意。并且文中也用了一些較好的句型，如where we can see some old photos and learn about the history of Yizheng、 go boating 、go shopping、 Everyone should remember to take等。這些句型的使用使文章流暢，富有條理。 |
親愛的留學(xué)生同學(xué)們，我們剛剛成立了美式橄欖球隊，這正是展現(xiàn)你們才華和風(fēng)采的機會。等你報名參加吧！ 這里有你的一席之地。你將成為萬眾矚目的明星。一份關(guān)于寫給留學(xué)生的感謝英文信英文書信中的表示感謝
As soon as I opened your package, I felt that I must sit right down and tell you...
一打開您寄來的包裹，就覺得應(yīng)該立即寫信致謝。
I just wish you could have seen ...
我愿您知道……
You were kind to send a gift ...
承蒙好意，送來禮品……
Your lovely gift came this morning(was waiting for us when)...
厚禮于今早收到（當……，厚禮正等我們?nèi)ツ茫?br>Expected gifts are a pleasure to receive, but unexpected remembrances are an even greater joy.
意中之禮物果然可喜，而意外中之禮物更使人喜出望外。
You couldn't have given me anything that I wanted (would enjoy) more.
再沒有比您的禮物更為我所想要的了。（更能使我喜歡了）求助我給我外國朋友寫信Dear students,
First of all, allow me, on behalf of the leaders of our school teachers and students are warmly welcome to come to you, welcome to our school and life.
Campus life is different in different countries, in order to make your life more comfortable, the following I will describe some of the proposals in my school life.
First of all, cannot call the teacher's name in China, because China is a ritual of ceremony, Chinese used to call the expression of respect for teachers.
Secondly, I hope you cherish the time studying in China, take the initiative to increase opportunities for interaction with Chinese people, so that both can improve your Chinese language level, can understand Chinese culture.
Finally, if you encounter difficulty in living and learning, to communicate with us in a timely manner.Wishes you to study abroad in China live in interesting times!
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